Please edit this for me!? - cinderella readers theater
This is the theme of the book summarizes call me Chinese Cinderella by Adeline Yen Mah
Chinese Cinderella Theme
After reading Chinese Cinderella, I was very grateful for my life. Adeline Yen had a hard life as a child, she was still a doctor and a very successful author. The book has me believe that anything is possible. Although nobody except Aunt Baba and Ye Ye concern about the future of Adeline, she is motivated and knew I had to be someone. She had a life of luxury as his half-brother and sister, but a possibility, not with these things helped him grow as a person. Adeline reader, that I wanted to say: "When Adeline was a success, perhaps I can too.
Thursday, December 31, 2009
Cinderella Readers Theater Please Edit This For Me!?
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I would change: "She had to grow a life of luxury as his half-brother and sister, but, as things have helped me as a person. In" She had a life of luxury that her brother and sitter, but do not have that luxury helped her grow as a person. "
ReplyDeleteWe needed extra punctuation in the last sentence. In addition, it was good:)